Creative Writting " with little creativity"

I was really excited about going to this boring trip. It would be the best day of the summer “I wish I could say that”. We were going to go rafting yeah!! Instead of a rock concert, this is unbelievable.
My family was ready to go. They were excited, why wouldn’t they be!!t. My dad knew a lot of stuff about rafting, but has never done it. This would be enjoyable.
When we reached to the spot, it looked busy and crowded. As we went into the boat it bobbled due to the fast flow of the water. I got scared “Like that would ever happen.” It turned out to be more boring than I thought, “Fun was no where to be seen”. We ate BBQ and drank Vodka. I was wearing a new Versace jacket and got wet. I hate my life
it was the best torture my parents could give to me all summer.